Cliché! but good nonetheless

cliché emotions, cliché story and cliché manga/anime drawing style.

However, you show talent in both drawing and using the program. you also do explain in the comment section that this cartoon isn't forced on anyone, and that's true. this is me trying not to be an asshole...

a calm sadness

For me this song was sad, but it kind of made me accept the sadness I heard. It's very ambient and calm but still makes you wonder what feelings the song is projecting

I'm pretty new to upload on Newgrounds too, and I had a little bit different approach to the Ambient genre, you can check it out if you want to :P

Very good for a first!

I feel it

Now this i can dig. Like it, but I don't know why the score is at 2.12. lets change that, shall we ;)

in some weird way...

...I like it. There's not much to comment, but sometimes it's not needed